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Honorable Mention
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Dale McLain

Could you blame me?
When I was in the eddy-
going ‘round and ‘round
slipping into the cold and dark,
I raised my small hand
above the hallowed water.
My fingertips just barely broke
the swirling surface.
I hoped my prayer,
unholy as it was,
might be heard.

When a shadow fell across the water
is it any wonder
I thought it was a savior?
Pretty words made flesh,
there to heave me
onto that steep bank
gasping and grateful
To say “Be well”
and “I’m here.”
Not some Jesus, just a ordinary man
who heard my voice
who saw me and remembered
that you can’t save yourself
grabbing on to kudzu
and cussing the very same Lord
who holds your fate
like ivory bones tumbling
in His almighty hand.

I was as naked as a newborn,
as frightened as a doe.
I needed saving so bad.
Needed, needed, needed
more than the true redeemer
Himself gould have given.
I needed a tent meeting
And an altar call.
I needed place to lay my head
on a hard pew or a living chest.
I had forgotten what was holy.

When he kept on walking,
as any wise man would,
the dust from his sandals
fell on the water as he passed.
I heard him singing,
sweet as could be,
a hymn of mercy.
I used my last breath
to laugh in the whirlpool
that baptized me again and again.

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